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Tears Spill
Blood Flows
how long will they go
before they stop
dead in their tracks
wondering why they keep going back
seeing for the first time
how hurt you were while they kept going
spilling and flowing
with no end
in til they finally stopped and realized
they should have stopped a long time ago
but they didn't
leaving you with all the pain
to endure while they were going on care free
Never ending spilling
none stop flowing blood
while the pain was going
and finally ceased
when your heart ceased to pound
one more pound
one more flow
another spill
before the never ending road to death
heaven and hell
places in between
do you know where your going?
or
do you just think that that's where your going automatically
What happens after death
do the tears still spill?
does the blood still flow everlasting?
what do you think?
Do you know there's anything after death?
Or is there never ending darkness?
The tears don't stop
the blood never stops
in til the last breath
©2009 ~lovingbitch
:iconlovingbitch:

Author's Comments

I was really hurt and came up with this COMMENT!!!

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:iconschematree:
I think this is very nicely written :)

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From what I've seen so far, I can't believe my eyes.
:iconlovingbitch:
thank you for the fav
thanks
ur the first to add and comment
:) most people dont comment
but thanks
i love ur art

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"Dreamin 'bout the day when you wake up and find that what your lookin for has been here the whole time"
You Belong To Me-Taylor Swift
:iconschematree:
No problem! I liked the poem :)
and thank you.

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From what I've seen so far, I can't believe my eyes.
:iconlovingbitch:
thanks

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"Dreamin 'bout the day when you wake up and find that what your lookin for has been here the whole time"
You Belong To Me-Taylor Swift
:iconevillittledevil:
im not a fan of blood but rly good poem =]

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give me a rose that blossoms love not pain
as you hand it over let a smile spread across my face
not blood be drawn..
:iconlovingbitch:
thanks

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"Dreamin 'bout the day when you wake up and find that what your lookin for has been here the whole time"
You Belong To Me-Taylor Swift
:iconsurfnmurf333:
I really like it and i understand the tears spilling and blood never stop flowing. i know the pain.

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:heart: & :peace:
:iconevillittledevil:
np

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give me a rose that blossoms love not pain
as you hand it over let a smile spread across my face
not blood be drawn..
:iconlovingbitch:
thanks
yeah i wrote it earlier yesterday like right after i was sad
and came up wit this

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"Dreamin 'bout the day when you wake up and find that what your lookin for has been here the whole time"
You Belong To Me-Taylor Swift

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